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“There’s a healthier way of thinking about creativity that the musician Brian Eno refers to as “scenius.” Under this model, great ideas are often birthed by a group of creative individuals—artists, curators, thinkers, theorists, and other tastemakers—who make up an “ecology of talent.” If you look back closely at history, many of the people who we think of as lone geniuses were actually part of “a whole scene of people who were supporting each other, looking at each other’s work, copying from each other, stealing ideas, and contributing ideas.”” (Austin Kleon, Show Your Work!)

Writing Exercise: Story in the Ecology of Talent

Key Techniques:

1. Interwoven Perspectives and Influence – Stories are not created in isolation. Strong narratives reflect how characters’ ideas, choices, and conflicts shape and reshape the story’s trajectory.

2. Momentum Through Creative Tension – The best stories do not simply depict a creative community; they harness the energy of competition, admiration, and betrayal to drive the plot.

3. Subtext as Narrative Engine – The deeper story unfolds between the lines. What is left unsaid—what characters suppress, imply, or deny—adds complexity and forward motion.

Writing Prompt (500 words):

A creative scene—a group of musicians, writers, painters, filmmakers, or performers—has produced a defining work: an album, a novel, an exhibition, a play. It’s a masterpiece, but no one agrees on who truly deserves credit. The story follows a pivotal night when tensions reach a breaking point. Secrets, rivalries, and long-buried betrayals surface, threatening to fracture the group forever.

Write a scene that builds momentum through shifting alliances, unspoken resentments, and clashing perspectives. The story should move not just through dialogue but through what is left unsaid, how characters position themselves, and the choices they make in the moment. The night must change everything—whether through a sudden revelation, an act of sabotage, or a quiet decision with lasting consequences.

Evaluation Criteria:

• Strong Response: The story’s tension unfolds through carefully layered conflict, avoiding exposition-heavy explanations. Subtext drives the momentum—readers sense the weight of past interactions shaping the present moment. The pacing builds naturally, leading to a resolution that feels both surprising and inevitable.

• Weak Response: The scene relies on direct confrontation without nuance, with characters explicitly stating their grievances rather than revealing them through action and implication. The narrative lacks momentum, feeling like a static conversation rather than a moment of true transformation. The ending feels forced or unearned.

Follow-Up Questions for Workshopping/Revision:

• How does the group’s shared history shape this moment? Does enough of it come through organically in the scene?

• Is the tension building effectively, or does the conflict feel either too rushed or too drawn out?

• Are the power dynamics shifting in a way that keeps the story unpredictable?

• What is left unsaid in the scene that could add depth to the narrative?

Recommended Reading:

“The Coast of Chicago” by Stuart Dybek – A story that captures the subtle power struggles and unspoken tensions within a creative community, using rich atmosphere and subtext to drive the narrative.


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