James Wood On Realism

So realism is at once true and artificial, pulled between life and art, the capacious and the selective, the camera and the painting.” (James Wood, How Fiction Works)

Writing Exercise: Exploring Realism Through James Wood’s Quotation

Key Writing Practice Development Techniques Illustrated by the Quotation:

1. Balance Between Life and Art: Explore how writing can simultaneously reflect reality and employ artistic selectivity to shape meaning.
2. Character as Lens: Use characters to bridge the “capacious” (life’s complexity) and the “selective” (art’s focus).
3. Convincing Realism: Craft believable yet artful depictions that resonate emotionally while maintaining authenticity.

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500-Word Writing Prompt:
Write a scene where a character confronts a mundane yet emotionally charged situation (e.g., a family dinner, waiting for a bus, or cleaning a childhood room). Use the following guidelines:

• Capacious Detail: Include sensory details that ground the scene in reality.
• Selective Focus: Highlight one specific element (a gesture, object, or line of dialogue) to symbolize the character’s emotional state.
• Authenticity in Voice: Ensure dialogue and internal thoughts feel true to life, avoiding clichés or over-explanation.

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Evaluation Criteria:

1. Realism and Authenticity: Does the scene feel believable and emotionally resonant?
2. Symbolic Selectivity: Is there a clear and effective use of one detail to deepen meaning?
3. Character Depth: Does the character’s voice and actions reveal complexity and relatability?

Strong Response Example: A character cleaning their late father’s study notices a worn-out pen on the desk, triggering memories of their strained relationship. The pen becomes a symbol of unresolved grief, subtly integrated without overt exposition.

Weak Response Example: A character overtly monologues about their grief while cleaning, with no symbolic detail or grounding sensory elements.

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Follow-Up Questions for Workshopping/Revision:

1. What specific detail in your scene best captures the emotional undercurrent? Could it be enhanced?
2. How does your character’s voice reflect their inner conflict? Are there moments where subtlety could replace explanation?
3. Does the balance between detail and focus effectively convey both realism and artistic intent?

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Recommended Reading:

• Lorrie Moore’s short story “People Like That Are the Only People Here” exemplifies realism through its blend of detailed observation and emotional resonance.